Tips to remember: keep verb tenses in the past when speaking of past events, checking for consistency throughout. Make sure to proofread carefully, reading aloud, so that errors like comma splices, missing words, jumbled sentences are fixed prior to submitting.
Also, a reminder, begin this essay with a Hook, an interesting sentence that engages your readers immediately in your narrative. There is no need for you to repeat the writing prompt or to discuss the concept of inheritance in a general sense in your intro.
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